Loneliness

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von  PandaOfLove

So this is me, sitting at my pc again. Sometimes i like to leave on the larger lights and sometimes i like the small lights instead. I like the candles, too. Who am I? I dont know myself. What am i feeling? Words are so precise when cutting through the veil of emotions. This time, though... Am i afraid? Am i lovesick? I am not sad, i believe. I better not be. Life is good most of the time.

I would like to share myself. To bring myself in. But i dont feel like bothering people. Life is not about me, i tend to believe. I am sorry to bother you, but would you help me out with this one?
I hope it doesnt annoy you, but would you have a look at this, please? Sorry, my fault. I should have done that instead.

I am not depressed. I am not bored. Life is good most of the time.
No? I am existing, thats good enough for me. Maybe i should share it with friends. Maybe i should make some friends.
I am polite and i dont bother people, why dont you want to be friends with me? I would like to fall in love. I am a weirdo, but cute. Or am i? Life is good most of the time. Or is it?

Anmerkung von PandaOfLove:

I did it, because i felt like it.

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 tigujo (16.04.21)
First impression: It's nice. Though nice is kind of... partly too sweet for the low amount of carbs and not spicy enough to fall for it.

Some remarks:
"Words are so precise when cutting through the veil of emotions."
What about "harsh" instead of "precise"...
Or, what about:
" Words are right when they lower the veil of emotion."

Could be the anchor to elaborate on...

Overall I like the beginning, all kinds of (artificial) light mentioned prepares the ground already...

Maybe a fresh remake might put in more carbs and spice ;)

Cheers,
tigujo
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